My silly naive mistake

 

 

Our engagement- the day we were blessed

Our engagement- the day we were blessed

 

Orkut gave me a good surprise in 2006.

I was lonely and confused and you gave me my answers

…I was scared of my decisions and the future untold

You held my hand and showed me the path

…I didn’t knew love and the magic it had

You touched me and I felt the miracles conspiring in my universe

…You gave me your shoulder when one shoulder left

You ensured the departed shoulder yours would be always there

….You made my wordings and wishes true

You did everything I imagined

…..You came with me and took a step forward

You took me to land unknown

……You gave me a house

You gave me new identity

………….You gave me security

You gave me care, comfort and generosity

..You forgave my mistakes….You understood me….and trusted me

You took my tears and replaced it with smile,

You held my hands and gave me your warmth…………………………………..

On the night we wed- we took vows

The vows reassured me I was safe and secure

I will be happy and I will be sound

The grey skies will clear and sun will shine

Love will conquer and fear will depart

Memories will be treasured and joys cherished

I will always be proud of you and smiling ……

On the simple mistake I made in 2006

How beautiful it has grown

How charming it has become

How comforting it has turned

My silly naive mistake of saying -

‘Let’s give it a shot’

My silly naive silliness of saying yes

Without meeting you

Without knowing you

The risk has paid off

I know you now completely

Somewhere out there he too is smiling behind the clouds….

He says thanks to you for taking care of his little Princess…

THANK YOU

24 Responses to this post.

  1. Wow!! wonderful! So did u and ur husband meet on orkut and then love blossomed??

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  2. Yay! Happy Anniversary, sweets!!! :D :D

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  3. happy anniversary :)

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  4. @ reema- Yes we met on orkut as total strangers……….and then love blossomed too soon….the day we started chatting-next day he proposed for wedding! and silly naive me said- YES!!

    :D hard to believe-yes it is!

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  5. @ Nikhil- Thanks for the wishes but the wishes are too much in advance….due in October macha!!!!! :) I wrote it today coz the day we met and he proposed on Orkut was 14th july 2006………..

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  6. @ Vishesh- Sorry dear..my post is quite misleading..its not my anniversary-not yet….. :)

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  7. vowwwwwwwww Orkut love !!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D superb

    best wishes

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  8. @ Dinu- Yeah!!! Thanks :)

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  9. @Fruity
    Still, its an anniversary!! :D
    Three cheers to Orkut! :D

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  10. @ Macha- Oooh yeah!!! it is indeed! :)

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  11. Oh my God! It all actually happened in one day over Orkut? Wow!

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  12. Congrats on ur Orkutversary !! Nicely written poem, especially the last few lines.

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  13. @ Ish- Haanji!!! All happened with Orkut!! ;)

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  14. @ Vimal – Lolz..thanks dear!!
    it is not essentially a poem..just random thoughts on paper…..about how I feel about the journey so far…

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  15. Yeah! i know its not ur anniv.

    i think u dedicated it to ur father in end…

    nice poem… compelling to imagine a happy couple which indeed is!!!

    checkout: http://jannatkiawaaz.blogspot.com

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  16. Yeah! I know it is not ur anniv…

    i think you have dedicated it to ur father in end…???

    nicely written, compels to imagine about a happy couple which indeed is… ;)

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  17. Machi,
    I feel so happy for you, da! Pass on my congrats to hubby macha!! ok? :D

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  18. Who need Matrimonial sites when our dear old orkut is here? :D Congrats and God bless. :)
    HAIL ORKUT!!!

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  19. Too good, man!… internet love, hun! cool! :) :)

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  20. proposal within 2 days :O my god this looks like movie..
    best of luck for the future ahead :D

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  21. :)

    (sorry for commenting late :) but I swear I read this on my mobile weeks ago :) )

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  22. @ Suda- But comment is not there? Just your smile :) Hhehehee…

    Relax its ok…..

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  23. Orkut love…? I think Orkut people should celebrate ‘THIS’ aniversary for u… :) If your hubby has made you to write this poem, then u must sure be a made for each other couple… coz, i’ve never known a girl writing a poem for a boy… and the one on top of the clouds must be on cloud nine seeing u happy below…!

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  24. Posted by stonezen on July 29, 2008 at 02:56

    That’s sound wonderful, almost fairytale like? Yes, this can happen. I have a cousin who said yes to a proposal by proxy. His parents sent him the photograph, THEY met the girl,was very impressed etc. My cousin, just could not get enough leave to manage the enagagement ceremony and the wedding, so he took the great leap of belief and landed up just for the wedding. He saw his intended for the first time at the ceremony! Of course, I need to say in passing that he was working in Canada. Well, to make a long story short, they got along like a house on fire, and there they are now in Toronto with a lovely daughter , both of them with very good jobs, seems to be perfect!!SO you see one never knows, and that’s the best part of life–impossible to generalize about human beings. Just that makes you committed to living every moment as fully as one can. Seize the moment, seize the day!!!!

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